moon hiding rains riding winds
rushing rains brushing roof
water brooms sweeping sweeping
this the night song of the rainforest
rushing brushing waves of wind
crackle of twig fall
voice of faint thunder meeting of tree limbs
as if they wanted somewhere to go
ohias tumble together
exchange ha, breathy kisses of wet bark
with daylight the clouds crack open
sunlight bright and warm as a fresh pancake
chorus of birdsong and the clouds slam shut
over here
across there, blue shows in the quilted sky
no water drops cling in optical orbs to the tall hapu’u
all pushed off by impatient wind
ah Prokofiev, the wolf is aprowl
you can hear him now
ancestor to all the forest
ghost howl lest his tribe be lost to time
ha is the sacred breath in Hawaiian
Ooh! Very nice - it has an earthy, primal feel about it. Powerful and strong.
ReplyDeletelikes the onomatopoeia. It takes me there.
ReplyDeletesome ghost of mine wrote the last comment... perhaps a boy ghost under my avatar :)
ReplyDeletebut this is my favorite one. i like ALL of the sounds.
the song of the forest sounds in my inner ear quite often... especially the "chorus of birdsong"... i am so jealous!
dear Ali it was ghost Zia
ReplyDeleteI am so happy you like this one. Are you going to do more?